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PostSubject: nviciable Heartless   Fri Dec 24, 2010 6:43 am

Name: Iniciable Heartless

Age:unknown

Gender:unnown

Personality: evil,dark,uncaring,heartless

Appearance:avtar

History : was a dark dictator who ruled a dark army and killed many people and worlds but was taken down and out by the heartless losing his heart to a greater darkness becoming an invincable heartless.
Position: Invinable heartless
Element: darkness,air

Realm:darkness


weapon name:ultima darkness
weapon looks:in avatar
weapon info:can make massive dark attacks with this blade

Weakness:nothing really basically being attacked wth akeyblade can phase him and light magic can burn him.

anything about your self:I like heartless.


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PostSubject: Re: nviciable Heartless   Fri Dec 24, 2010 6:46 am

add at least like evil or something to the personality.
make the history longer.
and you may be approved once you fix those problems Smile

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PostSubject: Re: nviciable Heartless   Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:25 pm

um how is that?
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PostSubject: Re: nviciable Heartless   Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:29 pm

not quite work on the history a bit more like make it specific please.

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PostSubject: Re: nviciable Heartless   Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:32 pm

i think that should do it i extended it and added a bit of prehistory to it
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PostSubject: Re: nviciable Heartless   Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:33 pm

nice work better.
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